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Twelve forlorn kids went out on an adventure;
One was stabbed with shrapnel and then there were eleven.

Eleven forlorn kids starting to wonder;
One overslept himself and then there were ten.

Ten forlorn kids searching for a way out;
One was lost in the dark and then there were nine.

Nine forlorn kids making a way out;
One chopped himself in halves and then there were eight.

Eight forlorn kids heard another scream;
One tripped herself and then there were seven.

Seven forlorn kids felt really tired;
One said he’d stay here and then there were six.

Six forlorn kids felt really scared;
One tried to ran away and then there were five.

Five forlorn kids encounter a stranger;
One was caught and then there were four.

Four forlorn kids fighting each other;
One was disappeared and then there were three.

Three forlorn kids starting to cry;
Two were protecting their friend and there was one.

One forlorn kid walks to the stranger;
What would she do now when there were none?
So I decided to add some elements of And Then There Were None by Agatha Christie
It's kinda tricky to make a story for horror game with 12 characters, so I kinda mix many, many plots from various sources

Here's the current mix:
And Then There Were None + HetaOni+ Corpse Party + Enigme + Mirai Nikki = ??????

So guys, here's the base for the plot. Anyone that want to help with the story, please send me your Skype account so we can get in touch easier ;)
...Please?
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blootsunami Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd love to help! Can it be a note instead? I have a Skype account but I don't use it much.
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BlueStorm-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sorry, but Note isn't really convenient to discuss stories :(
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blootsunami Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. Alrightie.
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Yandere-Vippaloid-09 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing!!!!
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GameME6 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is Amaaaaaazing~ =w=
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IcyIce360 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Awesome-socks!
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MarikosShade Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
This is frikkin amazing :D
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roppiepop Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ths is AWESOME! and i'd love to help with the story, should i just post my account here?
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BlueStorm-Studio Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
If you don't mind publicly giving your account, sure :)
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roppiepop Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why not? kh_ririe_3012
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